Man, this is really good. Very relaxing. I can imagine this during either during the walk of feels (part 1, I mean. The version with the percussion would then fit with part 2) or the judgement scene. I don't wanna spoil anything, but basically sometime during the trip to the final battle. It could use a better loop, though. I think you should fade out the string before the loop starts again.
Also, just an idea, I think maybe you can make sort of a part 3 to this if you catch my drift. It doesn't need to contain anything else from the original song. Just have more power to it.
Thanks for the review man. I know it doesn't loop the pad, would've taken too much effort to bleed the pad into the first bar so I didn't bother lol. Yeah I could make a more intense version. I appreciate you stopping by :)
There's not much criticism I can really offer than just experiment with the transitions, especially at 2:13. I think there it kinda died down too quickly. Also, I think it could've used 4 more measures in the sections before and after 1:01. I think that would've flowed more nicely into 1:07.
Sorry if I couldn't say much. DnB is just kinda difficult for me to review.
Also, is it just me, or does the percussion seem uneven with the tempo at times?
It's a solid track. I really like how you handled that saw wave with a mood like this. But I don't think the wobble bass at :53 really fit well with this particular kind of flow. Also, at 1:24, I thought that... thing came in a bit too suddenly. Maybe if you added a few bars in the bells beforehand that would help transition into it better? That way it doesn't seem like you just went into a completely different song or something.
Thank you for your review :)
Yeah, I also think that the whole song is just smaller songs mixed together. While I was experimenting on this track I tried different techniques of electronic music that I listened to and that is also the reason why at 1:24 it sounds like a whole different song.
Next time I will try to make a song that sounds like one song :D
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